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Fear

A fear I know I must let go of but cannot get past..
It stands in my way mocking me...
My mind telling me to move forward..
So my body tries..

And that fear holds me back..
Mocking my every waking moment...
Telling me to turn back..
So I give in. and let it control me...

Because i know no other way
To beat this fear..
And not let it hold me back
From the person I could be

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This is a poem i had written about one of my worst fears and it portrays all of my true emotions for this fear and how it does hold me back.

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~Kingpencil Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I LOVE this poem. The portrayal of fear in this poem is PERFECT! That s how I ALWAYs feel in the presence of any of my phobias.
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*Animal-and-anime-lvr Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks wrote this a while ago but it still holds true
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~Kingpencil Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Poetry is at its best when it is true, wouldn't you say? I try to make my poems true and engaging...like yours was.
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*Animal-and-anime-lvr Nov 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Agreed it is best when not fourced
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:iconmomokono:
be glad it's only fear, it could turn to get worse and maybe become paranoia belive me that happens and i tryed it :-d and that stated with i was afraid of the dark and then i stoped slepping and then i got afraid of people becuse i thought they all would hurt me and then my parents said it should stop and then i got into treatment (SP?) and im 15
so my point is i hope you get trought your fear and stay normal and uhhm have a good ? <3
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*Animal-and-anime-lvr Aug 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks i am trying hard to get over it but it's hard but i have gotten a little better
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:iconmomokono:
Thats good <8D a little step is always better than nothing <3
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~BloodstarWrath Jun 21, 2010  Student Digital Artist
Wow. This totally fits what I'm going through right now. Thank you for writing this. I couldn't have come up with better words myself.
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*Animal-and-anime-lvr Jun 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Well i am glad that you like it
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:iconjukidogirl:
I understand all of you. I've just went through hell. I have been captured by fear and have let it take control of me, but I'm trying my hardest to get myself back. (I have also had unmentionable things happen to me in my not so distant past, were talking about 3 months ago.)
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